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the world as i know it
Contributed by
nomie19877
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:45:38 AM in AEST
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The world as I know it is not how I love it
Unable to hurt the rest
But all hurting me
numbing my thoughts so i hurt less
I Fade in the background
not noticed by many
just another image that you walk on by
Death is silent
But pain isn’t
It is loud and screams at you to feel it
Life is long the longest jurney you could ever take no short cuts just pain
thats all
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Re: the world as i know it
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by buchi on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:34:52 PM AEST
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Life is long the longest jurney ...journey???
For a moment , I thought this was about " a face in the crowd"..correct me if I am wrong... |
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Re: the world as i know it
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by C2C on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:23:07 PM AEST
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What really sticks in my mind after reading your poem is "Death is silent but pain isn't."
How true that is. It makes me think of a funeral, how still the body is, and the pain of all the family. Morbid i know, but that phrase just strikes me. Way to make people think. |
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Re: the world as i know it
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:06:47 AM AEST
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| excellent write. =] |
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