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An Irish Sunset
Contributed by
Elena
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:38:03 AM in AEST
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The Irish sun is burning
Its rays bleed into the sky
Before a brotherhood of hiding stars
Evening lovers gather nigh.
A Celtic sunset is a warning
Of something awesome in the air
Of the worst of life and the best of it
Of friends and family drawing near.
The Irish twilight is a blessing -
A treble promise to unfold
The place on earth closest to God.
A lively evening story told.
The Irish sunset is a pledge
From departed pilgrims to return
As songs of erstwhile summerfest
Keep them as they journey on.
Copyright ©
Elena
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2004-06-08 06:38:03]
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:42:10 AM AEST
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This is excellent, Elena. I do enjoy the notion of sunset and sunrise/summerfest o'er the shores of the Americas.
Beautifully sentimental. |
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:53:51 AM AEST
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wonderful imagery...you took me there
Shari |
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:23:24 AM AEST
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Oh My Elena,
You did yourself proud on this one.
It was absolutely beautiful in imagery, and all other ways too!
Brilliant poetess' can paint sunsets with words that you can see in your mind's eye!
Prettiest one yet for me!
Marvelous indeed!
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by GeorgeJamesDelgado on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:55:00 AM AEST
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Just beautifully written Elena. An Irish beauty is who I am love with and this poem relates and releases imagery about her. She is like the rays of the sun. An Irish sun!
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by Princesaazul16 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:56:59 AM AEST
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Beautiful! You did a wonderful job. I loved it. I love watching the sun go down and hide behind this big hill side behind my house. It's so calming. I liked this poem for the life that you gave to it. You made me feel like I was there. I also like this poem because I'm mostly Irish! Keep up the good work. Hope to hear more.
~Stace~ |
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:16:02 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful! i've always wanted to go to ireland, but now i know i have to! you make it sound so beautiful! great write! |
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:50:47 AM AEST
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Beautiful. I can picture this and it's so full of meaning. Can't wait to see one for myself!
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:53:06 AM AEST
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| so beautiful...i am irish and i love anything to do with my country so thank you...it painted the sunset so beautifully...perfection* |
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:11:30 AM AEST
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Excellent write, beautiful images that I hope one day to see for myself
Smiles
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 02:09:18 PM AEST
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| Oh, Elena - I want to pack my things and put myself on a plane. Pictures of Ireland always seem to call to me... this poem does the very same thing. Lovely write! |
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by brigitte7735 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:38:25 PM AEST
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I seriously adore you
This isnt even my type of poem but god witness the tears in my eyes
Vanessa |
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:42:34 AM AEST
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Beautiful! Such a vivid sense of color and vitality. This is full of the love that the Irish feel for all the wonderful things of God's making. Well done!
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:41:02 AM AEST
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very pretty poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: An Irish Sunset
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by blueheart on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:40:38 PM AEST
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Elena,
You use such beautiful words to create an enchanting scene.
I absolutely adore the sunrise and sunset.
I truly enjoyed this one . |
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