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Heavenly Thought
Contributed by
merry
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:16:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Linear thinking was all about you
Before sunspots became blind spots
Darkness surrenders all its power
Lays down without a whimper
Heavenly dog
Constant chatter bothered you
Wore down your defenses
Left your emotions in tatters
Without any sustenance or recourse
Heavenly host
Vast amounts of vision wasted looking
At things that don’t matter
Staring up her skirt was a waste of time
She walked off without knowing your name
Heavenly woman
Nothing is as smooth or sure as it should be
You notice this and try to exclude yourself
Fastening blame on all the others
Until you find yourself so utterly lonely
Heavenly solitude
Heavy weight of inarticulate memory
Causes premature responses
Defiant gestures and uncontrolled anger
Linger on the tip of your tongue
Heavenly voices
Professing to lay down all that you are
Give it up and let it go
But it’s probably too late now
Null and void all exchanges
Heavenly peace
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-06-08 06:16:16]
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Re: Heavenly Thought
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:23:55 AM AEST
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| Interesting perspective and beautifully written as always. Stitch |
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Re: Heavenly Thought
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:35:28 AM AEST
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| wonderful definitions..skilled job..and it brings many smiles to me. :-) venkat |
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Re: Heavenly Thought
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:58:18 AM AEST
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| beautiful, wonderfully intersting and brilliantly written |
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Re: Heavenly Thought
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:25:23 PM AEST
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Heavenly poetry too...you always make me think when I read your writes. I will never understand why people arent flocking to read you. You are clearly the most talented free verse writer on this site. WAKE UP PEOPLE!!!
Very well done as always
Roses for my daisy
Larry |
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Re: Heavenly Thought
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:53:52 PM AEST
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sounds like this person has let all the good go and pass him by in life, living on dreams, quite sad, very well written poem! hugs n' love nessa
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