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crying silently
Contributed by
rugby_player
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:43:51 PM in AEST
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Every night
I sit in the dark
And cry my self away
To a place where everything is sad
Nothing happens for the good
But always for the bad
When i brought you in my life
I thought things were different
I thought we shared the same feelings
But i soon found out it was a lie
You would rather me die
Then spend one more day with me
I know my life is bad
BUt girl
I gave you the world
I couldn't afford to eat
Yet i would make sure you had everything
Then you through it all in my face
Now i'm alone
Except for the creditors
They won't stop calling
I owe this to you
You left me with this life long memory
I can't get a new car
I can't get a new house
I'm stuck
Worst of all
I'm stuck with out you
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Re: crying silently
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:57:56 PM AEST
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| your not alone my friend. good emotions. A++++ |
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Re: crying silently
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:58:06 AM AEST
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wow, another great poem...I love your work...and Im not the only one...lol this one had a lot of feeling and hope toward it...it wasa great write...stop doing what I told you not o do...lol you'll get it lol anyways great write...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: crying silently
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:54:32 AM AEST
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Very sad but it happens.
there are many women out there all they want is the almighty dollar.
It probably wouldn't have lasted so long if u hadn't had credit cards.
Awesome writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: crying silently
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by Justalady on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 03:43:13 PM AEST
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I can't get a new car
I can't get a new house
I'm stuck
Worst of all
I'm stuck with out you
Bitter tears, revealed in such a way that most of us can understand. You've wrote a surprisingly wonderful verse in the last stance. I wonder how many other's have said the same thing. Even in your silent tears I almost see a sense of humor..... sorry if that offends. It should be a song title, would be a best seller. Hugs, June |
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