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Gone
Contributed by
BaByBaNaNa
on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:11:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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It's all over now
My life is done
I got to go now
But it WAS fun
I love you all
And I'll watch over you everyday
When you call
Please don't be sad about what you hear
Most of you won't
You don't even care
You'll just say
"Well, now she's out of my hair!"
Well to those of you who say that
***** YOU
Just a few of you were real friends
Just a few . . .
But I love you all any way
Even the people out there who hate me
I love you guys, too
Maybe now all of you will see
Well-some of you called me crazy
You know who you are
Well look how crazy I can be
I'm out-I'm gone now
Copyright ©
BaByBaNaNa
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2004-06-07 23:11:26]
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Re: Gone
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by Tori on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:19:19 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you felt, I 've been there before. I learned that the way people feel about you and act toward you doesn't really matter you have to believe in yourself and you were right when you said **** you to them they don't matter. So be strong and keep on going.Don't do that again okay! Your a really good writer and you could make something of it one day. |
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Re: Gone
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by Avila on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:24:27 PM AEST
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| YEA A!JUST LIKE SHE SAID DONT DO IT AGAIN U GOOD WRITTER U! |
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Re: Gone
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:07:09 AM AEST
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I can relate to this poem a lot. A few years ago I tried suicide myself but got caught before I could do any harm. This is a good poem and shows good emotion. I hope all goes well and you can find some hope and happyness as I did. God Bless!
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Re: Gone
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:53:32 AM AEST
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Hi Baby,
I can also relate to your words, as I too tried to take my own life a few years back and I am so glad that I didn't although I still feeling like going down that road when I am feeling down, but for you to be able to write about it, it a great thing,shows you have inner strength and that inner strength will one day be strong enough to beat this for good,
great poem, very emotional and touching
takecare
Pixie xx |
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