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I've Shaved My Head
Contributed by
iluvpencils
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 10:21:17 PM in AEST
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I shaved my head today
I let everything go away
Today I wanted to say
"I think I'm a different person today"
And now I'm standing here
Looking at my hair
Lying there on my linoleum floor
I know you said you care
You told me "Don't you dare"
Well I did, now you won't look at me
And I'm thinking about how stupid I was
But I'm so glad it's all gone
I shaved my head today
To see if it would work
Throwing everything away
And after all the time it took
I know you can't even bare to look
But I feel a little bit better
Everything spread out before me now
Lying helpless there on the ground
I think I see clearly now
Though I'm still so confused
I shaved my head
I pick up a strand,
Hold it in my hand
Damn! How stupid I have been
But it does feel good
Send me an answer,
Why didn't you then?
I shaved my head today
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Re: I've Shaved My Head
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by Avila on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 10:31:30 PM AEST
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I dont know what's up w/this poem but i like it
its kind of funny its like the person wasn't thinking about what he/she was doing at the time untill they finally realized it.....good poem |
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Re: I've Shaved My Head
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by rugby_player on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:47:04 PM AEST
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| I like..great job. I just shaved my head the other day |
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Re: I've Shaved My Head
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:19:35 PM AEST
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Nice Write sorry bout your head though.
Personally I LIKE HAIR on PEOPLES Heads.
The only reasonable reason to shave ones head is to hid Bald comin in. :-)
Nice thing is IT WILL GROW Back.
Nice write.
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Re: I've Shaved My Head
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by iluvpencils on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:29:41 PM AEST
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| Thanks for all the compliments guys but I need to clear this up: it's not really about shaving your head. I know it's a weird poem and I don't know why I used that as a metaphor but I just did. It's about forgetting all the stupid, pointless, painful stuff that's hurting you inside and getting on with your life. I know it's weird...but anyway...yeah, thanks again. |
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Re: I've Shaved My Head
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by buchi on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:13:22 AM AEST
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| I see it...amazing...you are a genius..metaphor..some cultures carry this out to get rid of their SINS!!!...but you gave it wider meaning...cant wait to read your future metaphors... |
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