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Try To Leave Peacfully
Contributed by
iluvpencils
on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:56:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Close your eyes
to silent chaos
Let your heart beat
one last time
Remember me
as you fade away
Feel the cold rush over you
as your hand drops to your side
I'd call you back,
Make you feel again
Try to breathe all the world's
life into you
i'd do anything for you
if I only knew
If anything was real
Copyright ©
iluvpencils
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2004-06-07 21:56:40]
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Re: Try To Leave Peacfully
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by Avila on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 10:48:46 PM AEST
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short but very powerful poem
it got to me and my friend sitting next to me that would also like to commment.......
Hey gr8 poem i loved it u rock |
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Re: Try To Leave Peacfully
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by buchi on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:53:00 AM AEST
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| Yes...we all pass out ..from REALITY..but love keeps you from death...just cool...I love it |
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