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Steel Heart
Contributed by
crimsondream
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:32:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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hit me all you want
scream at me some more
paint walls with my blood
feed your love with gore
slide the knife down
go from throat to heart
but youll not be able to
cut my soul apart
grown to iron against it
its you that taught me how
do your worst, you wont win
it doesnt hurt me now
come along from those days
of hiding, tears, and screams
take my blood, take my flesh
youll never take my dreams
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crimsondream
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2004-06-07 21:32:53]
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Re: Steel Heart
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:42:39 PM AEST
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So powerful, so powerful.
This was a great write, one that I really enojoyed. I hope no one ever takes your dreams.
Keep this kind of stuff up, I know I'll appreciate it. |
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Re: Steel Heart
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by evilfairy on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:43:26 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem. I admire your strength .... |
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Re: Steel Heart
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:49:19 PM AEST
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| Oh... I agree! Powerful! I know the feeling of segregating the soul from the physical self. It can set you free. Let those dreams fly! Yes.. Yes! They are yours to keep! |
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