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Crystal Blue Dancing
Contributed by
LittleWillow
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:15:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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when the leaves move in breezes unexpected
swirling clouds protect the water dancers
in their leaping ballets they tell stories
droplets of mist speak of lost love stories
they crash to the surface to talk of dark horrors
when you see the dancing shadows hit the moonlight
the silhouettes bounce down to the tree trunks
crashing, burning passion,
the water dancers crash and burn
tranquil blue flames devour the mist drops
the water dancers rest for the night
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LittleWillow
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2004-06-07 21:15:20]
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Re: Crystal Blue Dancing
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:33:23 PM AEST
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ummmmmm ...lovely imagery
thank you
Shari
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Re: Crystal Blue Dancing
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 10:29:48 PM AEST
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A very beautiful picture you have painted here... Thanks for sharing..
Welcome to YPDC if I haven't said it as yet...
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Re: Crystal Blue Dancing
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by JT on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:25:08 AM AEST
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what a moment captured here. A beautiful story.
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