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CAN WE?
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:20:50 PM in AEST
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...Intwined...
...As One...
SultryRose's Signatures
Can we watch Stars
under luv's canopy,
roam in woods so free,
sleep till noon,
Feel me swoon?
Ca, Ca, ca, can we,
Streak in the rain,
Make luv like a huricane?
Ca, ca, ca, can we,
Get wild-n-free.
Can we dance in fire,
like my ancestors did,
Cut loose, be kids,
Put demons to hell,
With a read neck yell?
Only luv can survive
when all is done,
Can we, darlin, hon,
let luv float free,
Along with God, you, me?
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emystar
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2004-06-07 20:20:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheVoice on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:51:17 PM AEST (User
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great job
the voice
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:27:46 PM AEST (User
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Kewllllllll Emy! Bet he says "yes". LOL
Love n hugs,
Rita |
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by evilfairy on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:53:11 PM AEST (User
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Great work - i loved this |
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by uchendu on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 04:47:21 AM AEST (User
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Plenty of blessings for this kind of work. Go on doing what u do well Emy. |
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:35:48 AM AEST (User
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Sounds so romantic and lots of fun too!
How lively, robust, and adventuresome!
And you with your big heart and loving soul.
Why fantasize? Make it come true little Emy,
just you and he, and your ancestry makes 3.
Very different.......but so like you Emy. Your Poetry will stand for all times.
love
momconsue
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:30:58 AM AEST (User
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I like. Beautiful view of strength in love. Where together true energy flows free, & Happiness is survival.
God bless you. Great poem. |
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Korax on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:34:51 AM AEST (User
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Its like dancing amogst the elements. Great work |
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rose on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:24:59 AM AEST (User
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Very nice indeed, Emy. I liked this one alot.
keep 'em coming..... Amber Rose :) |
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hurretje on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:13:03 AM AEST (User
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Utterly romantic, a dancing praise to love!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by loveisendless on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:33:45 AM AEST (User
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NICE ONE! WHAT AN IMAGINATION YOU HAVE!! IT WAS INSPIRING,WAY TO GO EMY!!!
LOL~DAN!!!! |
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by hannahbanana on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:35:48 AM AEST (User
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oh wow. i love this,. great poem. |
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:22:08 PM AEST (User
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cool picture. really nice poem, very interestingly written. nice job. i liked it.
Arden |
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:51:43 AM AEST (User
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great picture emy girl, wonderful poem! hugs n' love nessa x
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by critterhideaway on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 05:27:12 AM AEST (User
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Sounds like great fun, my dream of sorts. Thank you for sharing this with us. |
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Re: CAN WE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_bear on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:50:58 PM AEST (User
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