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Should I Pull Myself Together?
Contributed by
Joker17
on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:43:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Sometimes I think I’m crazy
Mixed thoughts within my head
Should I Pull Myself Together?
Or pull the trigger instead?
And I wonder why I feel this
It seems that I’ve been cursed
To have to feel too much
As common sense and guilt conversed.
I just can’t stop my emotion
It’s so deep inside my heart
So Should I Pull Myself Together
Before she pulls me apart?
I don’t know how to fake this
Why must I be this way?
A man should not get this lost
In tears, with so much to say.
I have to ask this question
Before I send my goodbyes
Should I Pull Myself Together?
Or pull the hammer, and close my eyes?
I don’t think that this is normal
And I know this can’t be me
I have never been this fragile
And broken down so easily.
So I must find my reasons
To make these thoughts fade away
So Should I Pull Myself Together?
For you, I’ve pulled together, today.
Copyright ©
Joker17
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2004-06-07 19:43:00]
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Re: Should I Pull Myself Together?
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:58:36 PM AEST
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A beautiful highly emotional poem. In the first stanza you asked two questions should u die or should u pull yourself together. I think u should take the harder of those two choices and continue on it would be better for all the parties involved.
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Re: Should I Pull Myself Together?
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 09:31:01 PM AEST
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| amazing write. the emotional outpour in this is evident. |
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