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Our Flame
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:09:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I feel frozen in time.
It’s been so long now
Since I last called you mine
And now I’m lost in this space
This space that was then
And it was all so very good
But now I can’t recall when
I lost you and left you behind
You called me that day
And I was as excited as you
Because I thought we’d found our way
Back together - finally again
But your path has diverted
And been joined by hers
Now my path is deserted
And I’m left waiting for you
You tell me nothing’s changed
And I believe you, I do
But I must be deranged
Because we’re both wrong
We’re wrong to believe
That what was, can still be
There’s no way we can weave
Our lives together again
It doesn’t seem right
To walk away now
I feel I must fight
For everything that’s there
There’s a bright burning flame
That will never blow out
And there’s no-one to blame
For what should have been
MW 07.06.04
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evilfairy
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2004-06-07 19:09:12]
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Re: Our Flame
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by Luinil on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:20:26 PM AEST
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| a sad story, but told beautifully. interesting rhyme pattern... great write |
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Re: Our Flame
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:26:59 PM AEST
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Nice write I know how you feel. Good choice of words it really puts the feelings on the page.
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