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Noticed
Contributed by
MollyElizabeth
on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 06:28:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You walked by me today,
you said hi to me today.
I wanted to tell you,
but I just couldn't.
I uttered a simple hello,
but I don't think you heard.
So now I walk away,
changed for life.
I guess I was wrong,
so I'm not really invisable.
Copyright ©
MollyElizabeth
... [
2004-06-07 18:28:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Noticed
(User Rating: 1 ) by imaginary on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 06:42:46 PM AEST (User
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I kinda know how that feels. I like the way that you said that though, i really like the ending its what sents it apart.
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