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A Heavy Heat Settles
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 06:26:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A heavy heat settles
Its weight upon every surface
The sweat dissolves
Hanging in the air with the humidity
A heavy heat settles
Its weight upon our chests
Sucking air away as we breathe
Never lifting even after surrender
A heavy heat settles
Its weight upon our eyes
Causing them to droop and close
Drugging us as our bodies grow limp and lethargic
A heavy heat settles
Its weight upon us with no escape
No comfort comes from anywhere
Save the trees
Who strive to create a pleasant breeze
Oh, Trees, your efforts are in vain
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liquidsunshine
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2004-06-07 18:26:25]
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Re: A Heavy Heat Settles
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 06:29:52 PM AEST
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| :) I liked this.. especially the last line, you seem to always have the perfect way to end your poems. Good one Chelsea. |
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Re: A Heavy Heat Settles
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by Stitch on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 06:45:31 PM AEST
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Moving. I could feel the heat and your passion for the subject. Nice write.
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Re: A Heavy Heat Settles
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:37:01 PM AEST
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Nice! I like the style of this one.
Yet here I am, and it's cool and rainy outside. I'm forgetting heat.
Take care.
Andrew |
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