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Alexander the Coppersmith
Contributed by
Elena
on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 05:47:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Alexander the coppersmith, if only I had my way
You’d be dining at Earth’s end, say, starting from today
Or pipelining or fibre-opping the Atlantic Ocean floor
Out of my sight and mind NOW and forevermore.
Alexander the coppersmith, look into my eyes
Have you always been a problem case, a devil in disguise?
Or is this new even to you, to cause so much disarray?
It’s you or me, and I fear it’ll be me who’ll go away.
Alexander the coppersmith, your skill’s so finely honed
You’re an expert forger and solderer, but you’re not the only one.
So go take your expertise and please use it as you will.
And give me a break, man. You know you make me ill?
Alexander the coppersmith, if I could lose you in a crowd
I’d count myself so fortunate, I’d LOL.
As I bid you farewell now, believe me, it’s for keeps.
Forget my name and number and let me get some sleep!
Copyright ©
Elena
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2004-06-07 17:47:55]
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Re: Alexander the Coppersmith
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:13:44 AM AEST
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Well I think you've told him off well enough - nicely done.
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Re: Alexander the Coppersmith
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:29:20 AM AEST
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Wonderful administration of feelings here.
I do like the way you express yourself so easily, on any kind of subject that rises to meet you.
Amusing, intriguing and powerfully expressed.
Well done. |
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Re: Alexander the Coppersmith
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 05:52:03 PM AEST
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how sad...how final. loved it.
thanks for sharing |
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