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Inivisible Killer
Contributed by
Jade_Ring
on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 05:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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With naked eyes and sweaty hands
Blistered lips in lonely lands
Swallowed screams and broken cries
Deep beneath, will death arise
A monstrous wave comes crashing in
Some black huge funnel, rage within
A little palm, so limp and cold
Or buried fear, with pain untold...
And yet the beast that starts it all
The ugly thing with it's apall
Is cooling me as I sit close
Almost like it's trying to boast...
With all the tortured souls now killed
All that the innocent did build
Every house that it's torn down
The wind goes by, without a sound...
Jade Ring
Copyright ©
Jade_Ring
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2002-10-15 05:15:00]
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Re: Inivisible Killer
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by Xenodata on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 05:53:58 AM AEST
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| Wow, what a wonderful start. I can picture what you're describing just like if it was in front of my eyes. |
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Re: Inivisible Killer
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by InexactExactness on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 09:37:48 AM AEST
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| You may be a newbie here but you're not a newbie when it comes to writing poetry. |
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