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Snake, Insane

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 04:36:33 PM in AEST
Topic: insomniac



Sensual kisses
all over my brain...
The bitter hisses
of a snake insane


(It's Simple, Plain)

Two can play at your game.
(a war of words
you'll disagree)


demons’ fire

Within, with
(out)
…reality…


merciless
war inside of me...


....Maybe....
...so...

Winds of hatred manifest

(loathing, hatred meets incest)

in dark caves and rolling stones…



(as you know)
You get what you give,
you shoot me
I'll shoot you...

...back...

and forth, lifeless body drags…

(lifeless bodies wear no tags)


Poison my mind
…and I'll do the same…
(because you get what you give, and)
(two can play this game)


Hear the wailers’ cry
(howling demand)
sobbing, hidden

(a smile at hand)

on hand
and It's time to be me…
(hide my head in the sand
caress my feet with the sea)

Is there a game in progress?
...I think not...
[i will]
[not think,
now]

self loathing runs, and
i have gone...



(This is hopeless)

But i FEEL so, And

I think you've forgotten
that I know a lot and
more that you don’t…

about the way he feels
and the way that you do


(...i'm a little strange,
too deep for you...)


Black clouds of confusion
amass within your soul…
(quivering claws will penetrate
your mind)

[swallow you now]
[devour you whole]



See, I'm a little too nice
When it comes to you
Trying to give advice
(see you won’t let it through)

Why do i bother?
[after what you put me through]

!!AGAIN!!

After my ex did the same
do you think it was easy?
...forgiving him of that…

{do you even think!?}


"It's mercy I lack"
Who's words were they?

back and forth, your
lifeless body drags…

(undiscovered bodies wear no tags)


...And now I pray...
…For the day…
this pain instilled will

GO AWAY!


THIS GAME
{i cry}
DON'T WANT TO PLAY
{or lose}

What choice is there
(to die)

or choice to choose…?


I'm sick of losing at this game,
but you don't know my other name
I’m laughing, you’re
(driven insane..)
For it's me you drive
Happy?
(I hope you thrive,
Off the tears I cry)

All because I can't resist
{Your beloved egotist
when I'm through
will not exist}
to read your words…

snow is falling
tinged red
icy eyes of hate…

(there's no mistake)

God is bleeding.

I just can't believe
what I do to myself
But you're no ***** help

(although i tried with you
that's the kind of person you are)

Well this is me
letting my feelings free
(I hope you like it)
(There'll be a lot more…)

Now

i end this rhyme
(in hopes you read )
...in slow, unfast, and slower speed...
EVERY SINGLE ***** LINE

If I must know you, then,
You must know
me; We'll
no longer hide, for
...your benefits of pleasure…



Snow is falling
tainted red
icy eyes of hate…

There's no mistake.

(God is bleeding)


A snake insane,
simple, plain.

Blood.
Red.
Rain...





Copyright © SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2004-06-07 16:36:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Snake, Insane (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:17:04 AM AEST
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I think its ace, obviously no one esle does lol, oh well =) x




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