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just need goodbye...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 04:20:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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why should
I try
why do
I cry
for your
love now
I dont
know how
to forget
you fled
left me
for dead
no words
or tears
just me
my fears
and this
deep scar
you went
to far....
I miss
you so
you just
dont know
I dont
wanna pry
I just
need goodbye....
Copyright ©
holderofthestone
... [
2004-06-07 16:20:04]
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Re: just need goodbye...
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by pixie on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 04:24:24 PM AEST
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I liked this one, your style is very different to my own, would like to read more from you
takecare
Pixie xx |
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Re: just need goodbye...
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 04:44:26 PM AEST
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aw my favie writer...you know I'll always love your writing...lol I liked this one...it had a lot of emotione in it...it was a powerful write...but your writing is so much like mine...we are I think going through the same things...talk to me if you want...Im here...and I will keep looking forward to reading some more of your beautiful writing, passages...etc. lol
much love,
Dani
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Re: just need goodbye...
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by LittleWillow on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:07:28 PM AEST
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The style of your writing on this poem is unique. Very cool. I guess it shows you don't need 10 words a line to describe your feelings. LOL, who does that remind you of? (Me, duh!) You're so creative.
~*Megan*~ |
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Re: just need goodbye...
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by nomie19877 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:37:43 AM AEST
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I think that your poem is very good even though you used a few words your poem has a lot of emotion
not many people can do that |
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Re: just need goodbye...
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by MDodgen on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:24:29 AM AEST
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| i love this style. i just wish i could write as well as you. wonderful poem, it makes my heart cry for you. keep up the good work. |
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Re: just need goodbye...
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by swiftsouljah on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:20:11 PM AEST
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It seems like those that you hold close always end up hurting you the most...
I know what your going through... i dont want a good bye... I want a why... but not just any why the truth... but yeah you cant have it all... but maybe you have to lose everything to gain it all... good job
wayne |
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