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Contributed by
AnaBanana
on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 04:06:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Every time you get a beer
if only you could hear
every hurtful word you say
directed to my ear.
All the pain inflicted on
my bruised and battered soul
either shows how much you really care
or rather how you don't.
How could you say you love me
as you shake me up inside?
You corner me with no way out
and no safe place to hide.
Your so-called love rains down on me,
I have no shield from you.
I know that soon I will be marked
with shades of black and blue.
You tell me that you love me
and you tell me not to tell.
I look in the mirror and all I see
is a little bit of hell.
But soon I'll be okay
in a day or maybe two,
when all your anger fades away
to the guy that I first knew.
I like the way you make me feel
so glad to live the day,
safe from all the fear I know
in that random world of rage.
Copyright ©
AnaBanana
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2004-06-07 16:06:48]
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Re: You
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by Elena on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 05:43:49 PM AEST
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Definitely a story worth telling, and well told.
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Re: You
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by teethgrinder on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:11:34 AM AEST
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I thought this was really good and thought provoking
but the rhyming scheme really annoyed me.
sorry.
*pix* x |
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