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CHiLDHooD iNNoCeNCe (VoL. 5)
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:52:43 AM in AEST
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Violently her eyes flickered open
The only noise; a quiet 'beep beep'
Moms face drawn, restless and sunken in
Across the stale white room began to weep.
The smell a pungant odor
Of cleaning supplies and bleach
A urine colored undertone bed sheet
A tube caught her arm from the reach.
"Hi Mom, whats wrong"
She asked, with frail vocal chords
"Im just happy you're finally awake"
She said, walking closer on the squeaking of boards.
Never before and never again
She said to herself in her head
Adjusting herself in the seated position
In the painfully metallic hospital bed.
Then she noticed a tiny window
Looking out over the fragile parking lot
She watched as the rain drenched streets shimmer
On concrete that almost looked hot.
There she tried to imagine the snow
And her favorite bedroom window and sill
But this minute was too happy
For once she was happy to be alive still...
(To Be Continued)
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Re: CHiLDHooD iNNoCeNCe (VoL. 5)
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by pixie on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 10:07:52 AM AEST
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5/5 wonderfully written,look forward to the last volume:)
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: CHiLDHooD iNNoCeNCe (VoL. 5)
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by Black13 on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:07:42 AM AEST
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This one had a hopeful air to me.
I enjoyed this one.
Very well written. |
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Re: CHiLDHooD iNNoCeNCe (VoL. 5)
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by purplestary on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:46:32 AM AEST
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| these are all so great. i can't wait for the 5th one. |
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Re: CHiLDHooD iNNoCeNCe (VoL. 5)
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by purplestary on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:48:29 AM AEST
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| ok...6th one..this was the 5th...sorry....don't mind me...i'm not all here right now..i had to read non stop from 7:30am till 11:30 am...and if we even so much as close our eyes for a second we get kicked outa the program...sorry again... |
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Re: CHiLDHooD iNNoCeNCe (VoL. 5)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:00:58 AM AEST
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Written with care and hope.
Much enjoyed. |
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Re: CHiLDHooD iNNoCeNCe (VoL. 5)
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:37:10 PM AEST
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lindsey this is so captivating and i must go see how you end this tragically beautifully written story now... hugs n' love nessa
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