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A feeling
Contributed by
NaughtyGurl
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:42:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Theres a pain that crawls beneath my skin. Eating away at my hope and faith. Taking me away turning me inside out ripping at my heart.
Reopening closed wounds , cutting way at my soul. Tearing my flesh from m body, engulfing my tender flesh.
You try to save me I know you care. but the feeling still lingers that no ones there......
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2004-06-07 07:42:40]
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Re: A feeling
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by SheDevil13317 on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:14:25 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem, just remember -feelings are written better than thoughts- |
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Re: A feeling
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:45:08 AM AEST
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| very dark. i can relate x |
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