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That night in the park
Contributed by
sweetansexy
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:05:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Alone in the darkness
I sit and cry
I can never forget
No matter how I try
Ill tell you what happened
That night in the park
When I was walking home
Alone in the dark
He came out of nowhere
I had no time scream
It happened in slow motion
Or so it did seem
He pushed me to the ground
And held me down tight
I started to struggle
And put up a fight
He told me to relax
And I wont get hurt
Then he took out a knife
And ripped open my shirt
I started to cry
The pain was unreal
Everything around me
Seemed so surreal
He laughed as I begged him
To please let me go
Will I die tonight?
I just didn't know
I remember waking up
In a hospital bed
Beaten and bloodied
Maybe better off dead
The nightmares not over
I live it every day
The memory of what happened
On the 5th day of May
Copyright ©
sweetansexy
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2004-06-07 07:05:50]
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Re: That night in the park
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by pixie on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:12:54 AM AEST
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Oh I am so sorry that you had to be subjected to this horror, but thank you for sharing it as it is a sign of strength if you can talk about it, ((((HUGS)))) I was raped so I know how you feel.....
Pixie xx |
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Re: That night in the park
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:19:38 AM AEST
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Sent a chill right up my spine this one.
I'm male but I've never understood what drives a man to rape.I can only assume it is a diseased mind.
Probably not an easy thing to write about either.
Good luck
steve |
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Re: That night in the park
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by SheDevil13317 on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:19:57 AM AEST
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| Yeah, I got a chill too, it was an excellent write tho, and I fully understand were your coming from, I too was raped about a year ago |
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Re: That night in the park
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by Black13 on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 02:24:35 PM AEST
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Very powerful write.
I agree with uh.... Puppy/stever over there.
It was a good write though.
Well done with a good flow inspite of the badness behind the story. |
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Re: That night in the park
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by eatfresh22 on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 04:47:55 PM AEST
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This poem makes me want to cry. It touched me so deeply. I hate him! Horrible, selfish person! I am so sorry for you. I'm sorry that you have to relive the memory. I wish you could forget. I wish you could heal. I'm so very very sorry...
~Carrie~ |
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Re: That night in the park
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by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 01:56:04 PM AEST
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Wow, this is so powerful, and really hits home on a personal level.
My mind is hoping that this is just fictional, yet my heart really tells me a different story....
I'm truly in awe of your raw honesty here, I really and sincerely am x
I'm sending you the biggest cuddle.......
Star x x x |
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