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CHiLDHooD iNNoCeNCe (VoL. 4)
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 02:57:59 AM in AEST
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Without a second thought
Or a third or fourth glance
The razorblade she pressed firmly
She needed to take the chance.
She knew there was no other way
She had lived with it for far too long
As she watched the blood trickle down her palm
She imagined so much with her gone.
As panic started to set in
As well as reality and the pain
Backgorund filled with drums and guitars and melodies
Silencing the fallen rain.
And from the bathroom mirror
And from the corner of her eye
She saw her beloved bedroom window
Her body preparing to die.
She remembered all the places
The snow she imagined to be so white
The memory, her childhood, simple happiness
Everything that made her feel all right.
And then her muscles went limp
Her entire essence hanging weak
The feeling of hot liquid on her wrists
With all her might she tried to speak...
(To Be Continued)
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Re: CHiLDHooD iNNoCeNCe (VoL. 4)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 03:29:06 AM AEST
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This has been harrowing (yet disturbingly compulsive) reading so far. You have great character, Lindsey - I for one think its inspiring to know that you've got the courage to write about these things . . .
I am looking forward to the next volume with expectancy - although I do hope it exudes some positivity.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: CHiLDHooD iNNoCeNCe (VoL. 4)
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by pixie on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 06:29:08 AM AEST
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Wow, equally as gripping as the last, it's like waiting for the next episode of your fave soap, but 10 times better lol 5/5
pixie xx |
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Re: CHiLDHooD iNNoCeNCe (VoL. 4)
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by Black13 on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 10:37:43 AM AEST
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| This series is really good and the pain is perfectly portrayed. |
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Re: CHiLDHooD iNNoCeNCe (VoL. 4)
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:36:44 PM AEST
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so sad....... am still reading these........ hugs n' love nessa
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