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Black Well
Contributed by
Butterat_Zool
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 12:37:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I went and looked at old black well.
It’s said its waters come from Hell.
I went and walked up old black hill.
It’s said the sky there makes you ill.
I went and kissed the old black lips
It’s said her kiss is like a crypt.
I went and drank the black well drink,
and as I drank, it turned to ink.
My body rolled right down the hill,
and turned into a plume as well.
My mouth is all that that kiss left.
It warns, in ink, the dear bereft.
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Butterat_Zool
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2004-06-07 00:37:41]
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Re: Black Well
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 04:23:21 AM AEST
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Intriguing piece.
Thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: Black Well
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by wray on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:34:23 PM AEST
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Hmm verrry interesting, I don't know whether you intend it or not but the way you describe each verse is kinda creepy... Potentially very good start for a creepy TheRing-like story.
Actually no, this reminds me of Book #3 in an awesome fantasy trilogy you should read one day: The Farseer Trilogy. |
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Re: Black Well
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 01:58:19 AM AEST
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i dont know what it is about this poem, the flow, enchanting quality or your own very unique style, but i really love it:) hugs n' love nessa
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