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leaving
Contributed by
crimsondream
on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 12:13:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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never came to think
home would be where i dont belong
tying these memories up
and throw them out to sea
never came to think
that this isnt really me
a mask of feathers
of glitter and gold
a living masquerade party
dancing with unrecognized guests
a mask of feathers
appears my best
trying so hard
to keep you happy, not to see
but my heart is bound on the floor
i'll stay safe, hiding from you
trying so hard
to keep away whats true
Copyright ©
crimsondream
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2004-06-07 00:13:15]
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Re: leaving
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 12:22:51 AM AEST
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open touching write very well done Id give it a ten but we will have to go for the five stars
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Re: leaving
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by Elena on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 05:42:06 AM AEST
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A good write, I liked the atmosphere.
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