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This Is My Last Poem
Contributed by
Rylo
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:42:25 PM in AEST
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Swallow the pills, and feel the chills, as this is where your life now spills.
Get a good grip on death, and enjoy the thrill, for your life has just went downhill.
So many emotions that are to strong, and so many things in life go wrong.
Sounds like we have all heard this, same sad song.
Take a gun and put it to my head, so I can go and dance with the dead.
Take my life for I do not care, just tell my family that I tried to be there.
Cut me deep with a rusted up knife, for I really do not need this life.
Then tell all of my poetic friends, that I went to dance with the dead.
Do to all of the emotions, that messed up my head.
This is the last poem that I will ever write, for tonight I will take my own life.
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Rylo
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2004-06-06 22:42:25]
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Re: This Is My Last Poem
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:49:36 PM AEST
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You don't have the right to do that. If you do it, fine, but don't announce it. Personally I have had my fill of the suicide crap. There are a lot of people that die that don't want to and you don't appreciate the life you have. Angel sure doesn't need the grief and neither does anyone else that cares for you. You are just selfish. I say to hell with you if you do.
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Re: This Is My Last Poem
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by evilfairy on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:49:38 PM AEST
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I hope not Rylo.
I don't know you or anything about you,
but i've been to that point where the only answer was to take my own life. I didn't succeed and today i am glad of it. I can't imagine being back in that place where everything hurt, and there was no escape from my hell.....but today it doesn't hurt, and i did escape and i am free. i hope you let yourself find your freedom, and i hope i see more words from you again.
i wish you courage and strength tonight Rylo.
Mégan |
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Re: This Is My Last Poem
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by shelby on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:49:47 PM AEST
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Ron now damnit it please dont do this!! This is so upsetting to me I dont know wheather to be ***** off or cry so you and I will be having a very long talk promptly my friend. I dont want you to dance with the dead I want you to walk with the living.Your poetry needs to be written and shared I love you my friend and I want you to stay.
Michelle |
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Re: This Is My Last Poem
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 11:02:19 PM AEST
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| The tear drops because I cant reach you now and tell you DONT please dont. not worth it. your life is so important. read my poetry you can read that i have been where your at right now. and i made it. you can make it. we all get this way sometimes. but please dont. take our hand your friends.. and let us care for you and love you. let us bet there for you.. i would rate this poem a five but how can you rate a poem that is sad. how can you rate it and say this was good.. so letting you know. your moved me to tears .. here is a hug. take care. and i expect a note in my instant message tomorrow letting me know y our ok........................... please......... sandy |
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Re: This Is My Last Poem
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 11:24:28 PM AEST
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Ron Dammit If You Do This Then I'll Die Right Along With You... I Mean It Dammit.. You Are All That I've Got To Live For... After All Remember When We First Started Talking? I Told You I Was Giving Up On Life & What Did You Say??? You Told Me Never To Give Up & I Think You Should Take Your Own Advice Baby !!!! You Have Really Hurt Me Deeply By Reading This !!! Ron Dangit I Love You & If You Do Something Stupid Then You'll Be Giving Up On Us & Our Dreams & Future Together !!!! I Don't Think You Want This Do You???? Ron You Have Got Me Really Crying & Worried Here Now & I'm Really Shocked To See You Post Something Like This !! Please Don't Make Me Worry Myself Sick Not Tonight Baby I Can't Handle It !!!! Damn Ron Your The Best Thing That Has Entered My Life Except When I Opened The Doors To My Heavenly Father I Can't Bare To Lose You !!!!!
LoVe - AnGeL
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Re: This Is My Last Poem
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by brigitte7735 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 11:50:36 PM AEST
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I dont know you at all
Its very very disturbing writing this, wondering if you will ever even read it ..you could be dead already for all i know. But if you do, know that i dont think youre selfish , i dont think youre stupid
I hope to god this is just a cry for help, but i still take it very seriously and turn to your friends, alot who express geniune care and concern for you here.
/sigh I wish you the best in whatever decision you make...
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Re: This Is My Last Poem
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by spooky on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 03:32:45 AM AEST
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| life is to short, for words like this,,chose your words wisey, and write another day,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: This Is My Last Poem
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by drinkWATER on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:17:00 AM AEST
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funny that when a popular poet like Rylo threatens suicide it gets alot of attention, their are ALOT of poets on here talking about suicide every day virtually. wheres the sympathy for them. should their be sympathy for them? or Rylo. It seems selfish. but Im not disturbed - as I said this is discussed FREQUENTLY on this site and its hard to know if its genuine or if its just to get attention.
however dont kill yourself - think of the simple thing. epicuris was a man of great wisdom - there is more joy in a potatoe than the most expensive meal on the planet. prepare your pallet and YOU decide how it will taste.
dont murder yourself |
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Re: This Is My Last Poem
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by pixie on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 10:01:55 AM AEST
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Rylo,
I have written a poem about thinking of taking my life today and I will be posting it later on, but I know that I am strong enough and I can get through this as can you, you are just at a very low point, but hang in there things will get better, you are NOT alone in all this as there are many on here who can relate and offer you friendship.... me included..
takecare,
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Re: This Is My Last Poem
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 06:45:29 PM AEST
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My god, I hate people who think that people are writing to ask for attention....you write to tell how you feel...I have written about my expierience with death...and i really hope you arent gonna go through with it...I really hope you stop and think that thinks get worse before they ever get better...My heart goes out to you Ron...and you shouldnt post that on there is you had Angel and you knew she would read it...I read the comments and there are so many people that care about you...and i know that sometimes it is really hard...but if you cant do it for your self right now...do it for them right now...and grow upon it...youll realize that your glad you didnt take your final breath...I really hope you are alive to hear this...because if you are message me...and tell me that things rae ok...I wantto help...I dont know you very well, but I know people care...I can be there for you....all those people are here to help they all care for you...well most of them...but just if you are alive...think about it...message me...I'd liek to talk to you...you can yell at me...and get your frustrations out...do whatever you want...just as long as you are ok
much love,
Dani
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Re: This Is My Last Poem
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 10:33:27 PM AEST
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| well i read your other poem first so my ideas of this poem are most likely altered. but when i read this i didnt feel any emotion at all like you didnt mean any of it, that you were just writing down words. and plus most suicidal people that ive come into contact with arent so dramatic but that doesnt mean that there arent any. this looks like some work went into it and not many people who are fixing to kill themselves will put so much thought into a poem when they are fixing to kill themselves. but of course these are opinions and not fact so it doesnt matter. im rather glad you wont commit suicide because i rather enjoy your poetry. |
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Re: This Is My Last Poem
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 05:15:08 AM AEST
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i thought this poem was very well put together.
There are times that alot of us feel this way.
And its ok to write about it.
great write. |
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