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Left Unaffected
Contributed by
essentially9
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 09:59:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Left Unaffected
I begin to wonder again
Did he ever stop and think
What leaving would do to me?
Has he ever wondered
What life would be like now
If he never would have left?
We'll both never know
It's too late now
Too much time has gone by
To ever forgive a failure
The one that doesn't care
And left here to go there
To wherever for forever
I haven't heard from him
In thirteen years
But I guess it doesn't matter
I was left to live with my unwed mother
I don't ask questions afraid to know
If I really do want to know you
Unlike you I care about my flesh and blood
I'm not going to leave
My child before it hits age three
But this might run in the family
To be dysfunctional
To ruin everyone's future
I just wonder who I'll be in this world
If I'm unaffected enough
To forgive you and move on with life
Or just blame you for all this strife
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Re: Left Unaffected
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:06:30 PM AEST
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Re: Left Unaffected
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:24:58 AM AEST
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How many people wonder the same thing..You have alot of depth to you that I really think alot of ppl are unaware of..This site is called your poetry.com
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Re: Left Unaffected
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:13:57 PM AEST
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Very strong...and I have to agree this is more stright forward then your other poems...great Job...
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