|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Love Gone
Contributed by
dark-princess-of-Avalon
on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:42:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
I broke your heart but didn't mean to.
I took soul and sucked you dry.
I didn't know how I really felt untill I started to cry.
I found out i really care for you and I miss you all the time,
I say I didn't rip your heart and care but I did.. it prolly broke my heart more.
We are two diffrent people but we act as one, and in the heat of things we glow and show the whole world we are in love.
Babe I didn't mean to hurt you or even make you cry.
But deep inside I know it's right.
If I had the chance to change it I know what I would do.
I'd never gotten close and hurt myself when I knew it wouldn't work.
Copyright ©
dark-princess-of-Avalon
... [
2004-06-06 20:42:49] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Love Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:48:13 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very tragic. excellent write. |
|
|
Re: Love Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by evilfairy on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:53:56 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Another beautiful poem....
This one touches something deep inside
me - it's like you've seen inside my soul :( |
|
|
Re: Love Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:01:17 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very mature and reasoned inspiration here. I like the way you had me conned into believing this was an average love poem, up until the last line.
Intriguing stuff. |
|
|
|