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End of time
Contributed by
rugby_player
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 07:00:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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When it comes
You will know
Tis different for everyone
No one knows what it could bring
Could it bring the end of light
Or could it bring the end of times
Which ever it maybe
Be prepared
For if you are not
It maybe to little to late.
Look at the person you love
Tell them how you feel just one more time
Make the most out of every moment
Don't let things get you down
Just look up and smile
Tell him your ready to come home
Darkness will soon be setting in
Embrase the light while there is time
Don't look down on people less then you
If you are like me darkness is your only friend
Its always there for you
It makes you feel good
Darkness can help you get it out
I welcome the end with open arms.
And pray it comes soon
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Re: End of time
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:44:52 PM AEST
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wow, I think this is a powerful write I dont know why you bring yourself down...your writing is what you feel...and i love it...great expression its scary tho...imagining all of that...but It's a great write...
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Re: End of time
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:43:47 PM AEST
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I welcome the end with open arms.
And pray it comes soon-- yup me too... this is very powerful. a great poem full of emotion and strong words. I say dont beat yourself up, you have a great talent. A+++
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Re: End of time
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:24:17 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
I know we all take people for granted but truth is we never really know who's gonna be the next one to see eternity.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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