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Summer
Contributed by
naughtygurl
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 06:47:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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The sun Is warm across my face, The sweet breeze tastes delicous on my lips.
Fluffy white clouds look like sotton wool, as the trees sway In there green trans.
The sky is a saphire blue , and the foaming see an emerald.
everythings starting new trying to make of what they have.
And finaly a smile across a young girls face.
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2004-06-06 18:47:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Summer
(User Rating: 1 ) by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:19:30 AM AEST (User
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wow, cool. a contrast from the others i just read. very well done, some beautiful imagery there x |
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