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picture in my mind

Contributed by angel_facing_judgement on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 05:19:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

in a misty sea of dreams i reach into my soul and i take a look inside.....the colors faded, the cobwebs hanging.....and to me it seems as if ive been gone for years.....a hundred things couldnt have dragged me away except for you......as you came and went i abandoned my mind.....

hoping and praying that you would be different from the last...a new book to read, a new color to paint my picture with....but as you went i found you were the same old dirty brown and my picture still seemed so faded...

am i lost to the same fate forever...to cry as the dreams pass me by because i havent the heart left to paint them inside this dusty place i call my mind....am i left to scream as the dark closes in and the silence takes over because ive nothing left to give?

i sit and wonder as i light the spark to give way to the flame that will light the candle inside my mind....im so afraid to let it go to waste as you go away but what choice do i have... i loved you and your walking away from the picture inside my mind

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Re: picture in my mind (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:51:12 PM AEST
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Achingly beautiful words...

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