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feelings lost
Contributed by
lexxie
on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:43:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my tears desolve
the pain inside
the tourterd mind
my hearts starts to heal
once agian
i know it's a trick
a fake attempt
cause you'll
leave me once agian
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lexxie
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2004-06-06 16:43:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: feelings lost
(User Rating: 1 ) by MDodgen on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:54:54 AM AEST (User
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short, sweet and to the point. very poetic. nice job. |
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Re: feelings lost
(User Rating: 1 ) by Beautifully-Imperfect on
Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 03:14:55 PM AEST (User
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Very direct. I like it Great job |
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