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GoodBye
Contributed by
jillian_f006
on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:59:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The night is cold
The sun is black
I sit in my room
The boys have left
He made me feel like *****
He made me hate myself
I can’t take the pain anymore
Take my life and keep it safe
I can’t do the job myself
The best I can do is cut a deep wound
I’ve done that for a while
People think I’m crazy
I can’t see the pain
So the blood makes me live it
I’m going soon
To a safe it’s not in this town
It’s not in this world
The place I’m going
Is to heaven soon
No wait this is the end
I’m saying goodbye
Copyright ©
jillian_f006
... [
2004-06-06 15:59:00]
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Re: GoodBye
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by screwup on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:08:32 PM AEST
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| Hey, good write! I can relate. Most of my poetry is about exactly what you are talking about here. I hate it that people feel like they can take control of other people. If you ever need to talk I'm here...just pm me. |
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Re: GoodBye
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by Arius-Inues on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:26:39 PM AEST
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| I love this poem, as you can see most of my poetry is dark or suicidal as well. And as said above if you need to talk, e-mail me at blacksalemrain@hotmail.com, talk to you then. |
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Re: GoodBye
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by iluvpencils on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:41:35 PM AEST
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| I can definately relate with the cutting. That's all i do...it makes you feel real again doesn't it? |
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