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Dying Inside
Contributed by
screwup
on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:43:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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pushed away, uncared for, I stand tall
your hellish face still in my head
making my thoughts as nightmares alive
much of my life a scary hell with you in it
you hurt me so bad that Im dying inside, all alone
dont wanna see your face
it haunts my very core
to know that you are standing there coming over me,
ruining me, haunting me, ripping me apart
a drop of blood drips down my battered body as I scream for help
so scared, so numb,
you, standing there with a gun
still over top of me,holding me down
can feel your breath, can see no fear in your eyes, dying inside
pushed away, uncared for, I stand tall
dying inside
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2004-06-06 14:43:03]
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Re: Dying Inside
(User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:48:56 PM AEST
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I liked some of the expression in this, its very haunting in a unique way.
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Re: Dying Inside
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:50:13 PM AEST
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This poem IS awesome! Great job!
Katie |
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