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Dark Secret
Contributed by
Bloodthirsty
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:10:14 PM in AEST
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I have a dark secret
I no longer can hide
I sit in mr room
Commiting mental suicide
Death and distruction close in over me
Drowning in sadness
Its all I can see
I can hear people screaming
Make it stop!!!!!!!!
I cant take this anymore
I've never felt so hopeless before
The cuts on my wrists show my past anger and fear
but no matter how much i try
my pain wont dissapear
Digging deep for answers it what my life has been about
Now that i know what the answer is
Its time to throw it out
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Bloodthirsty
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2004-06-06 14:10:14]
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Re: Dark Secret
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by jillian_f006 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:14:17 PM AEST
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| I can totally relate to the whle poem. good job. MSN me |
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Re: Dark Secret
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by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:15:53 PM AEST
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| I loved the line 'committing mental suicide', I've never heard it before, and it just sounded so original and ... cool. This poem is grand in everyway, and your projection of pain, suffering and angst onto the reader is a considerable accomplishment, great work and keep it up! |
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Re: Dark Secret
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by brigitte7735 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:39:12 PM AEST
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Very very good
Vanessa |
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