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My Dying Hole
Contributed by
TwEeK
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 09:57:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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alone i stay
crumpled in the corner
crying and bleeding everlasting tears
this is where i spend each and every day
quiety dying
slipping away slowly with each rasping breath
clawing at my skin
this skin that holds my tortured soul within
trying to rip it off and brake out of my shell
no one knows about me
nobody knows anything about me
about the creature that lurks inside my very disturbed soul
written poems of hate pain and death
the only form of expression of my confusing feelings
i just disappear and nobody can see me
each day my body fades
get clear as it melts into the walls
as i melt into the walls and fall away from reality
so today and each and every day of my wasted life i spend it
currled up into a tiny ball in the dark depths of my corner
my hole my dying hole
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TwEeK
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2004-06-06 09:57:10]
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Re: My Dying Hole
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by pixie on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:13:55 AM AEST
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wow, so dark, really loved this one,
thanks for sharing, 5/5
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Re: My Dying Hole
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:36:35 PM AEST
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Excellent write. The words you chose made me feel the emptyness and loneless that comes with it. Keep sharing your thoughts to paper.
Whisper |
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Re: My Dying Hole
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 09:27:52 PM AEST
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