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Life Without You
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:59:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Life is what you feel
And this hate will
Fade in time
I just can't get you off my mind
Life is what you will
Shrug the hate
Or let it stay
One or either way
You will die
On your way to decay
Life is such a good deal
Knowing all things come to end
I remember your were once a friend
But now just a thought I kill
So sad
Delieverance of life at this point
Wish you were here
But life is life
And those feelings dissappear
BY Dillion Ray
Copyright ©
rhei76
... [
2004-06-06 08:59:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Life Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 09:46:43 AM AEST (User
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another great poem, this one I really liked...
pixie xx |
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Re: Life Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by luckycharm on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:32:33 AM AEST (User
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Very deep and sad. You did a great job with this one.-luckycharm. |
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