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Balle
Contributed by
Xenodata
on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 03:32:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Cette douleur fulgurante,
Elle me peine comme un couteau,
Déchirant tous mes rêves,
Absorbant mon oxygène,
Dévorant mon avenir,
Je me sens si seul,
Dans cette noirceur ténébreuse,
J’ai si peur,
Je vais bientôt mourir,
Soudain, plus rien,
La paix, la sérénité,
Je baigne dans des nuages,
Le vide m’absorbe,
Je me fonds dans la vie,
J’ai une signification.
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Re: Balle
(User Rating: 1 ) by ginsdance on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 02:45:24 PM AEST (User
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I only speak a small amount of French (I am taking it in school), but from what I can tell... you are comparing the ballet to life... and that it is significant, every step that you take in the dance... (I can read, and pronounce... but not understand...) this reads beautifully!!! I am reading your French poems now, and they all read beautifully. I am surprised that others haven't read them and taken the time to put them through one of the translators online... (I think that's what I am going to do with a few that I couldn't understand!) These are beautiful!!!
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Re: Balle
(User Rating: 1 ) by Moca on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 03:02:27 AM AEST (User
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I think this is beautiful. Wow. Increible! I can feel the dance of emotions... the depth... wow. |
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Re: Balle
(User Rating: 1 ) by Xenodata on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 11:26:39 AM AEST (User
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"Balle" means bullet... and not "ballet".
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