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Back Stabber
Contributed by
bluoreo
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:38:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The acts of betrayal
This is an evil tale
He set me up to fall
And now I'm paying for it all
Knowing the real him is something I lack
So he grabbed his knife and stabbed me in the back
He pushed it in deep
Far enough to make me weep
I hate him
I'll rip him limb from limb
He is not forgiven
His face will be stricken
I'll ruin his life
For causing me so much strife
I believed his ***** lies
I'll leave his body for the flies
I let him gain my trust
And now it's left to rust
I am such a damn fool
For being his ***** tool
I am so irate
I have so much hate
What will I choose for his fate?
I can't hardly wait
Copyright ©
bluoreo
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2004-06-06 03:38:17]
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Re: Back Stabber
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:45:36 AM AEST
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Leave his fate to himself, and move on and heal. Hate is a dish that devours souls, what comes around goes around eventually.
Very good poem, you express so well what we all feel, when betrayed.
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Re: Back Stabber
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by pixie on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:42:31 AM AEST
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Let go of your hate as it will destroy you from the inside, move on with your life and be happy that will hurt this man far more than you going for him, as that will show him that he can still get to you... great poem, very angry I like it alot 5/5
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Re: Back Stabber
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by Sirena_Degana on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:47:40 PM AEST
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It'll all return back to him three-fold!!!!
~by the power of three, give him back what he gave to me three times three~
good job!!!
Blessed Be!! |
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Re: Back Stabber
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by Winter_Mist2004 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:42:49 PM AEST
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Very emotional, I love it! That's what I wanted to do to this chick. HA But she got it right back, don't worry it will go RIGHT back to him.
Keep writting.
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