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An Image in the Sun
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:45:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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gaze in my world,
as if lost in a dream.
a glance into my eyes,
will show all the pain
and torment,
welled up just inside.
i lie the crimson blade aside,
the silver shine of youth.
you turn away,
afraid of what might become.
your hair so soft,
your eyes so pure.
crackhead boy ,
has come and gone.
he washed in my wetness,
he drowned in my tears.
will you too,
return in the end?
to watch me on my knees,
suffering for my sins?
my dear dragonfly girl,
you've left me too.
i whisper to you,
alone in the dark.
the mind that used to be
oh so very near.
now you're just a dream,
an image in the sun.
filter down through
the clouds,
and dance with me
once again.
Copyright ©
MDodgen
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2004-06-06 01:45:07]
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Re: An Image in the Sun
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:22:12 AM AEST
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| vivid. Another good poem, one day youll find someone who values you and appreciates you fully. A+++ |
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Re: An Image in the Sun
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by venkat on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:15:51 AM AEST
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| well written..poetry flows beautifully. venkat |
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Re: An Image in the Sun
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by pixie on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:45:44 AM AEST
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this is equally as amazing, you Will find happiness once again, good thing come to those who wait.....
pixie xx |
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Re: An Image in the Sun
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:11:21 PM AEST
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Good write I felt this one .
Whisper |
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