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Alone in you
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:34:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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shooting cold fingers of pain
wrap me in your caress
shut my eyes
to love and care
you've crushed me with your walls
drowned me with your sweat
i've tried to listen
power crazed and alone
pumping blue veins of heat
sucking
clawing
gripping
emptiness in pain
shivering in love
cold in fire
alone in you.
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MDodgen
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Re: Alone in you
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:25:33 AM AEST
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| very strong. emptiness in pain- great line... I understand completely with this. your poems are so descriptive. A+++ |
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Re: Alone in you
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by pixie on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:47:30 AM AEST
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all 3 of your poems are wonderfully written, I look forward to tomorrow when I can read more from you :)
takecare
Pixie xx |
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Re: Alone in you
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by Sirena_Degana on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:40:54 PM AEST
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Detailed Greatly!!! Shows much depth!!!
Blessed Be!!! |
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