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my tale of a heartbroke man
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:20:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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alone I sit, pen in hand
to tell a story of a man
who had a love that once was true
but went away, and left him blue
it started when she looked at him
a strange new feeling soon began
at first it was a little crush
but love soon followed in a rush
you should have seen his dismay
when one day she sent love his way
and over time his love did grow
the extent of which she didnt know
the nights they spent bonded as one
walked hand in hand under the sun
she laughed he cried they shared it all
he was there at her beckoning call
but she soon thought time to move on
she packed her stuff and now is gone
and where she went he always wonders
why she left he constantly ponders
he didnt even get goodbye
one last chance to look in her eye
to embrace her and hold her close
to profess his love and to propose
does she know how much he loved her
and of this man does she remember
this should have been a great love story
a never ending show of its glory
but somehow it had gotten lost
when that line had gotten crossed
he stills spends his time alone
and always will till she comes home
the stories told the best I can
the story of a heartbroke man
I cant remember all the facts
I probably told it way to fast
but did you guess it do you know
Im this man of whom I wrote...
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2004-06-06 01:20:31]
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Re: my tale of a heartbroke man
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:41:00 AM AEST
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I'm not a man but I can certainly relate to this write. It's really sad how at times luv comes and then goes.
Great writing even tho very sad.
Hang tuff my friend.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: my tale of a heartbroke man
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:21:21 AM AEST
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Very good write, my friend. Sad, but something we can all relate to. Excellent.
Lindsey |
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Re: my tale of a heartbroke man
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by pixie on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:50:13 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, but very sad.(((((HUGS)))))
Sorry for your pain, but as time goes by it will slowly but surely heal
5/5
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: my tale of a heartbroke man
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:28:04 AM AEST
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I Too Am So Sorry To Hear About Your Pain !!! I Just Wish There Was Something I Could Do To Cheer You Up And Put A Smile Back On Your Face For I Hate To See Or Hear Someone Being Sad All The Time !!!! Cheer Up And Enjoy Life As It Is Now !!! Don't Dwell In The Past But Look At The Future & What It May Hold For You :-)
Love,Hugs & God Bless
LoVe - AnGeL |
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Re: my tale of a heartbroke man
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by Sirena_Degana on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:38:54 PM AEST
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| this poem is beautifully written...something many can relate to. and it's good that someone can finally put it down on paper!!! Blessed Be!!! |
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Re: my tale of a heartbroke man
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by MDodgen on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 01:11:25 PM AEST
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| good write yet again. i'm just glad you don't really feel this way. where would that leave me? |
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Re: my tale of a heartbroke man
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:17:10 AM AEST
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wow, wow, wow, very powerful enriched with a lot of emotion...well I loved it thats all I'll say...
much love,
Dani
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