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her
Contributed by
poemwritingdude
on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 12:33:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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she walks down the hall,
books in hand,
i'm frozen in place,
by the classroom where i stand,
her beauty shone throughout the hall,
and everyone could see,
that she was loving someone else,
and never had loved me.
her footsteps gentle as a feather,
the sunlight bright from beautiful weather,
and the streaks of sun ran through her hair,
causing everyone to stare
but as i looked into her eyes,
it came as such a big suprise,
to realize it wouldn't be,
and she wasn't the girl for me
but I still longed for her kiss,
and the times I'd spent with her
I missed
but i still walk by her,
waving hand,
not doing what I had planned
walking down the hall,
book in hand,
i see the girl i couldn't stand...
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Re: her
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by Escence_of_Anger on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:14:47 AM AEST
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| Nicely done! Excellent rythem, sad, but good! |
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Re: her
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:30:26 AM AEST
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I agree, sad but written well.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: her
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by pixie on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 05:19:39 AM AEST
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So sad, yet so beautifully written, I am sorry for your pain,
pixie xx |
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Re: her
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by Sirena_Degana on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:31:04 PM AEST
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| this poem changes quickly....love is to hate. hate is to love. a great write!!! |
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Re: her
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by WaitingToBeFound on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:40:54 PM AEST
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| woah. this is my fav of yours, so far. is this made up or on any one inparticular? good writings |
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