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Afraid to Love
Contributed by
Black13
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:00:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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My love always told me
that we'd be forever
I always told them
love me or lose me.
Baby you know that
I'll always love you.
Darling I'd rather die than
lose one moment with you.
You know I love you
but it's so hard to
let them go.
Well baby I know
you still love 'em.
Don't worry I'll
hold you till
you let them go.
Sweetheart I know but
sometimes I get hungry
and others I'm thirsty
then sometimes babe
I stumble and I fall.
Baby I've been there so
when your hungry I'll feed you
when thirsty I'll quench your thirst.
Babe when you stumble and fall
I'll always be there to
help you back to your feet.
Yeah, but sometimes I cry.
Well you could shed
a thousand tears and
soak a thousand shirts
but still I'll be here.
And sometimes I die.
Well darling I know this.
I just want you to understand.
When you talk I will listen,
when there is pain I will share it,
when you feel like dying I'll live for you,
and I just want you to know that
I love you.
Copyright ©
Black13
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2004-06-05 23:00:31]
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Re: Afraid to Love
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by Sirena_Degana on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 12:01:25 AM AEST
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| omg! this is one confusing poem i had to read it about 3 times to understand. the way u use ur words tell me something about your personality.........i like it, it's unique. |
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Re: Afraid to Love
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by arden on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 11:04:10 AM AEST
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not confusing, perfect.
one of your softer writes and a very good one that i enjoyed very much.
wonderful.
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Re: Afraid to Love
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:29:34 PM AEST
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Beautiful. In the most beautiful kind of way. The last stanza is just perfect. Wonderfully written.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Afraid to Love
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 06:00:54 PM AEST
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Well do I know this sort of hope that springs from darkness and loneliness.
It seems that deep down, we know such a love exists. Some there are that think they are incapable of feeling it... but no one has ever convinced me that it is just an empty dream.
Luck in battle, friend.
Andrew |
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Re: Afraid to Love
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 09:36:20 PM AEST
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Jeffrey this was a beautiful poem... don't tell me your going soft lol j/k. Even though this was about true love (which doesn't exist) I still found this to be a fond (yes fond just seemed to fit don't ask) and enjoyable.
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Re: Afraid to Love
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 02:59:50 AM AEST
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Black... Great job. Very sketchy, but seemingly realistic in conversation. Thank you.
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Re: Afraid to Love
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by sick_n_twisted on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 12:18:40 AM AEST
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| kool poem i loved it it is like a actaully convosersation |
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