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Nipple Ring
Contributed by
Ina
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:49:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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my nipple
has a ring
and it’s
name is
Shackles
and it
lives
inside my bra
and it swings
in the shower
and sings
my nipple
has a ring
and I wont
show you
Shackles
any more
Copyright ©
Ina
... [
2004-06-05 22:49:27]
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Re: Nipple Ring
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by youlied on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:17:00 PM AEST
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| For some reason this is really funny, I like it. |
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Re: Nipple Ring
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by TheWordChirugeon on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 05:33:45 AM AEST
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Wonderful. You got a nipple ring. Let me sum up my reaction in two words.
NOBODY CARES!!!!!!!
http://www.winternet.com/~mikelr/flame40.html
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Re: Nipple Ring
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by Ina on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:39:19 AM AEST
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Hey dude, I care deeply. seriously. you should see me caring. wow. scary. like i care what you say. oh yep. care.
thanks for the concrete criticism, always good when it is intelligently written. |
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Re: Nipple Ring
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by TheWordChirugeon on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:23:20 AM AEST
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Apparently, you're the only person who cared enough to post something about this poem.
I mean, really, who would care if someone got a nipple ring? Besides a pervert getting his kicks out of badly written yet erotic poetry. |
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Re: Nipple Ring
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:04:30 AM AEST
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| great poem ina... i liked it a lot. |
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Re: Nipple Ring
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by Ina on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:09:39 AM AEST
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| Hey World, you cared enough to check it (the poem) again, and then you cared enough to respond to it AGAIN, I see a lot of caring coming from you. You secretly like it...haha. Chill out. |
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