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Blue Dripping
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:36:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Hey, now
I am trembling, why
does this have to be so
pain is blue dripping down
bare chest
I really don't
Get this, why
can't I?
say what I feel,
what I want,
i don't want
to be plunged into,
(or say out ot)
this friendship,
relationship
Now what am I to do...?
everything's a controversy
And what am I to say.............?
brown oak leaves over black concrete,
wind blows,
pink bubble gum...
Oh my God what
is this meaning, will
everything I say
break?
Don't express, Do...
I DON'T ***** KNOW!
i'm so confused
I just don't know.
Scared now, scared
little trembling puppy
to approach and let near,
to let go and not fear
(scared now, scared)
P'raps I shant say
anymore, will I?
be safe
?
I'm so confused,
little puppy...
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-06-05 22:36:35]
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Re: Blue Dripping
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:47:03 PM AEST
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I didn't really get this, but it was still a good poem. I liked how u said pain was blue as opposed to the previous belief that it was red or some other colour filled with brightness and joy. Anyway a good poem my dear friend
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Re: Blue Dripping
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by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:11:52 AM AEST
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| Its hard to see the meaning, but it certainly makes me feel insecure reading this. Interesting write x |
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