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Addiction
Contributed by
youlied
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:17:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A shadow falls over me
Starting to sweat
Dripping, dripping
Aware of every sound
How quickly it sets
For just yesterday
Saw the ambient sun
Felt the cooling grass
What is a last resort
Suddenly seems so real
No sleep
Shaking
But it's only the night
Late, late night
And tomorrow
The sun will shine again
Tomorrow
Copyright ©
youlied
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2004-06-05 22:17:25]
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Re: Addiction
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by Luinil on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:31:04 PM AEST
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| very real expression of addiction.. great word choice... good write |
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Re: Addiction
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:32:27 PM AEST
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aw yes, a very powerful write...I loved it...it was a great write....keep it up and keep it coming...
please read and comment my stuff...I'd love to hear what you think if you want....
Dani |
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Re: Addiction
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by Ina on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:50:15 PM AEST
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In my head this poem was like warm wind in the summer. It flowed and it MEANT.
Thank you for your comments, so glad to have found your poetry. |
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Re: Addiction
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:14:18 PM AEST
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Yes .That is a excellent write. You hit the feeling rite on the head. I am glad I am not alone in those feelings. Thanks fer sharing.
Whisper |
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Re: Addiction
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by Dorkfish on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 04:12:54 PM AEST
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| Very good. I like your style of writing. Keep it up! |
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