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Help Me I Am Falling
Contributed by
KalRai
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:47:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Help me I'm falling so fast and so hard. I'm sitting here balling my soul is so scarred.
I'm screaming and yelling. I can't get away. And there's no telling if I'll see another day.
Help me I'm falling. I know not what to do. Darkness is calling all the day through.
I kick and I scream and put up a fight. It's like living a bad dream on a dark stormy night.
Help me I'm falling. I cant seem to stop. To anyone I am calling to help pick me back up.
But no one can here me. No one's around. And so very quickly I crash and burn on the ground.
Copyright ©
KalRai
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2004-06-05 19:47:13]
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Re: Help Me I Am Falling
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by Sirena_Degana on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:59:04 PM AEST
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| I like this poem. It's good. I can feel your suffering in this poem.. I like that this poem is not candy coated, fake in other words. It's flowy and the words go together..Keep it up!!! |
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Re: Help Me I Am Falling
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:40:22 PM AEST
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| nice. it is better to burn and rise than fade and die. be like a phoenix. |
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