|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Silent Hell
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:21:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
Forgive me now
for all the pains I've cause
I'll end it now
all my wrongs
My face will dissappear
from this silent hell,
and I'll fall forever
down this endless well.
My heart will stop
my lungs will fold
my eyes will shut
my blood will run cold.
My face will dissappear
from this silent hell,
and I'll fall forever
down this endless well.
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
... [
2004-06-05 19:21:30]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Silent Hell
(User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:37:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow, how sad...I know how you feel I have written many pieces of suicidal poetry...and it's really hard to feel emotional pain, so you hurt yourself...thats why I became a cutter...I hate my life...and I knwo if you talked to me in person a lot of people first opinion of me if "perfect"...but I'm so far from it...it's all a front, andyone can walk around acting perfect all day, but it doent make you happy in the end...I dont knw I hate it...and I have wanted to result to death many times...But soon it will get better for you, it has begin to start for me...I have been gettung better and better each day....it will for you, just hold on....
Read and comment my stuff I'd love to hear what you think...if you want
much love,
Dani
p.s. great write I loved it...great flow with your words.... |
|
|
Re: Silent Hell
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:44:57 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I thought it was pretty good, although I wouldve liked to have seen you go into more depth in the beginning, but I really liked it nonetheless. |
|
|
Re: Silent Hell
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:46:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| another great write. |
|
|
Re: Silent Hell
(User Rating: 1 )
by movax on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 06:08:41 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Great poem. Very evocative of going through a load of crap of a life
|
|
|
Re: Silent Hell
(User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 11:48:13 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
SUICIDE LIES! IT MAKES YOU BELIEVE THAT EVERYTHING IS GONNA BE ALRIGHT-NOT!! A SILENT HELL WE ALL HAVE HEARD
ONE OR MORE TIMES IN OUR LIVES-& IT
REALLY SUCKS!!! WELL WRITTEN THOUGH,
SIRENA!!!!
DAN!!!! |
|
|
Re: Silent Hell
(User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:48:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| You did a great job finding words that rhymed. I hope you feel better really soon. If you ever need to talk, pm me. |
|
|
Re: Silent Hell
(User Rating: 1 )
by lanz on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:02:56 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
awesome poem, really great. i identify with this poem so much, and it was so well written. i'll be checking out any other poems you have.
keep writing! lanz xx |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
