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Death
Contributed by
Naughtygurl
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 06:47:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sweet dreams don't last forever, Nightmares fill my mind until the fear is unbareable.
Screams fill the hall as someones soul becomes deceasced, Pain across my throat where blood gushes from my wound of dispare.
loinliness fills my heart ripping it apart. A louder scream of agony now. yes thats me burning alive.
My emotions engulf me until I feel no more pain. death awaits , behind one more scream someone save me.
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Naughtygurl
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2004-06-05 18:47:23]
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Re: Death
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:16:36 PM AEST
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| wow! I really like the way you write. your words speak so clearly, and your not afraid to open up, to tell the truth. I look foward to reading more of your poems, welcome to YPDC and keep em coming!!!!A++++ |
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Re: Death
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by Sirena_Degana on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:38:34 PM AEST
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Very convincing.
I like it..You can actually see it, disturbing.
but that's the way it's supposed to be.
BLESSED BE! |
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Re: Death
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:14:19 AM AEST
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| upsetting again x |
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